As part of the brief we had to photograph our final outcomes in contexts, here are some initial images I have shown in context. I think the contrast between black and white looks really effective in a real life environment and the focus on women stands out heavily as well. I feel that these work well as a series and I hope to photograph them in a women's institute also, to emphasise my focus on the target audience.
Below are my two feedback sheets, we all had to give anonymous feedback to two different people without knowing who's work we were criting too. It worked really well and the fact it was anonymous meant I gained more honest feedback which was more supportive. I gained some interesting comments, many about the use of black and white and they felt colour would have worked better. However I did earlier experiments with colour and from peer feedback at the time I decided to go with a more neutral appearance. Other feedback which came back was that I could experiment with the visibility of the text so show that this is also out of sight, or make it 'double vision' as though she is closing her eyes and seeing double. The most interesting feedback I gained was to experiment with mirroring the features on the 'image' piece and the 'type and image' piece, so that the series would make a complete face. This is really interesting and certainly something to work with. Here are my crit feedback from my 'Proverbally Yours' brief (21/10/11);
